Thursday, November 7, 2013
VIZA 643: Sample Treatment:(Updated)
SAMPLE TREATMENT UPDATED
NEW LOCATION: Hallway (NOT AN ALLEY)
- The opening scene starts of the film with typographical info on the symptoms of the main character and what disorders she may have(insomnia, sleepwalking, hallucination), followed by a voice over conversation between the main character’s psychiatrist and two officers from the police department discussing the history, trauma the character went through, the symptoms she exhibits and how she may be a suspect of an unsolved murder case. (During the voice over scene, the visual establishes the main character(Mary) sleep walking down the hall way....
*Knock on door*
Officer 1: Mr Roman?
Dr Roman: Dr Roman, and how can i help you officer?
Officer 1: We are from the Bryan District Police Dept, my colleague and I would like to talk to you about Mary Sullivan.
Dr Roman: *hmmmmn* come in...
*door closes*
Officer 1: Can you tell us about Mary...
Dr Roman: Mary is was my patient, and she's a sleep walker...
Scene Shots Summary
- Mary's sleep Walking down the hallway, shots..from a low angle
- Mary's subconscious, becomes conscious of her environment and then stops to look around, and then she
reacts to movement of blurry shadows around her, and spots blood stain on the wall/ground, Mary screams:
"what do you want from me?" and then freaks out and starts to run
- Reverse shots of Predator's Point of View and 3rd person POV, )hiding behind walls, watching (through the Camera Mary as she freaks out and runs from shadows running around from different spots
- In Predator's POV, Mary falls, hurts her self, now she is bleeding and she then gives up running, hides
behind a wall, on the other side of the hallway, she spots a baseball bat, and reaches out to grab it, as she approaches to grab it, she looks down the hallway,and for the first time, she catches a glimpse of the predator; she quickly grabs the bat, and goes to hiding...(reverse shot to show from predator's POV as he realizes he's been made and then goes into hiding,Still in predator's POV, then camera cuts out into a 3rd person POV, to reveal that there is no one by the wall hiding and also Mary's location down the hall
- continuous shot from Mary's POV before she decides to run and then runs to go hit the predator with the bat
- Reverse camera cuts back to Predator's POV as he is looking "SIDE - WAYS" he then comes out of hiding and Mary is there just as he(predator) turns to looks down the hall to smash the predator/the camera screen/ the audience with the baseball bat.
OR
- Reverse camera cuts back to Predator's POV as he is looking "SIDE - WAYS" he then comes out of hiding, runs down the hall towards Mary's hiding spot, and Mary pops out to smash the predator/the camera screen/ the audience with the baseball bat.
- predator's reaction to the hit, camera frame falls as tho its a human being.
- Camera's POV pans from the ground up to to look at Mary from a low POV (from the ground), Mary seemed Victorious for a moment, drops the bat, and muffles the words: No! No!! No!!! and then a shadow runs behind her, and Mary turns to look behind and she doesn't see it...
The End...
*Voice-over from Psychiatrist continues*
"Mary thinks she's killed it, whatever "it" was that was after her, she... believes she's healed, and that she was victorious *coughs*" - Voice over by Psychiatrist (Dr Roman)
Ending words by a voice over, or text "Mary is still Schizophrenic, and terrified of the dark, she
sleepwalks till today, she wasn't victorious...She never did, She never will be."
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